Monday, January 21, 2013

Searching for Everyday History


I didn’t set out to write historically. My first two attempts at a novel were pure fiction, one about time-travel and the other finds a school teacher caught up in the dark world of fine art acquisitions, forgery and high finance. Both are well developed with interesting characters and the synopsis on the school teacher story is complete — but the inspiration to keep going has gone.

Not on its own or by my doing or due to mysterious acts but simply a case of life offering me more enjoyable experiences than sitting alone in front of a blank page of paper for eight hours a day.

Then two summers ago I read a history book about the city of Paris, researching background for my In the Footsteps of Vincent van Gogh presentation. What I found was a sensational slice of history right in the middle of the Impressionists’ world. A history relevant to current American and world cultural issues and with so much adventure and plot twist that it inspired further investigation. After a bit more research I was hooked. It felt natural, a story I was meant to tell.

The synopsis flowed, three main characters showed up and the story took shape. Simple really, just drop a protagonist, villain and love interest into Paris, 1867 and let them witness the events of the next few years. It seemed easier to just write about real history than constantly be making stuff up. My imagination could just relax and let the facts do the work.

I studied popular history books for a few months and got command of the chronicled evidence. Not too complex really, the facts are straight forward, and well documented. But less than a thousand words into chapter two my whole plan collapsed.

I needed my character to travel across town. Simple enough, walk out the door, down the street and ride over to her destination. But wait. How far is she walking? What is she walking on? Stone, dirt, concrete or mud? Can she go alone? What style of dress is she wearing? Makeup? Does she carry a purse or handbag? What will she ride? Is she allowed on a public bus? Is she rich enough to have her own carriage? Is it covered or might she use a sun parasol? Pulled by one, two or four horses? Just ride her own horse? Side-saddle? Where will she put the horse when she arrives at her destination?

My recent knowledge gains in French geopolitical history proved worthless. I needed to know the history of the omnibus! And to learn about crinoline and cannon and coal gas; about everyday life, the uneventful stuff historians don’t bother to write down.

So back to the research books, back to the Internet and back to old world Europe to search out mundane history. In Antwerp I rode on an omnibus and chatted with the driver. He was a wise old man with a big mustache who told me exactly how my main character was going to travel from her home into the city.

I think it would have be easier to have my imagination just make all this stuff up.

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The Omnibus was around in Roman times. Omni is a Latin word meaning: all — a bus for all people. This double-decker version debuted in 1854.

Monday, January 14, 2013

Face to Face With the Second Step


Today I washed all the dishes in the sink and even wiped down the whole counter top and stove. My wife will be happy. I fixed the screen door so it slides in the track better. Finally got to that pile of old clothes in my closet. Man, I have a lot of space now! Took the car down for an oil change and new wiper blades. Winter is here so best to keep my family safe. I called a good friend that I hadn’t seen in months. He wanted to know what I was up to and I said I had started writing my book.
“How’s it going”?” he asked.
I answered proudly, “Well, today I washed all the dishes and…”

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Monday, January 7, 2013

So Far So Good



I wrote 1,200 bad words for a first chapter. So far I am a success. I have reached my goal.

“Every journey begins with the first step…” The second step is the hardest. Then the journey continues for a very long time, but only at the rate of one step at a time.

If my first step puts me knee high in mud, what shall I do? Cry, cruse and complain loudly for sure but then what? Many would wisely retreat back to safety but the artist, entrepreneur, leader, writer must carry on and take that second step. From there the third follows and with a battery of courage and patience the journey will finish with the final step.

That’s what writing badly is all about. Writing is the step to be taken, judgment is the mud, the shit, the I’m no good. Even if it is true it is still just judgment. To write a book one must write. So write. Remove judgment and expectation. Remove everything. Just write.

Anne Lamott in her 1994 book, Bird by Bird: Some Instructions on Writing and Life, wrote about her belief in "shitty first drafts":
“Perfectionism is the voice of the oppressor, the enemy of the people. It will keep you cramped and insane your whole life, and it is the main obstacle between you and a shitty first draft.

“I know some great writers, writers you love who write beautifully and have made a great deal of money, and not one of them sits down routinely feeling wildly enthusiastic and confident. Not one of them writes elegant first drafts. All right, one of them does, but we do not like her very much...Very few writers know where they're going until they've done it.”

The first draft is suppose to be less than the final product. That’s true in all endeavors. The first film I made was not my best, it took me twenty years to master photography and all my attempts at paintings are still lacking. While working on the light bulb, Thomas Edison invented very badly. But he didn’t see it that way, rather, “I learned 1000 ways to not make a light bulb.” The journey can’t begin at the top of the mountain.

Edison also said, “Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration.” Writing is the perspiration part. So whether goodly, badly, enthusiastically or indifferently, I will just write.

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Tuesday, January 1, 2013

It Was a Dark and Stormy Night

Today I start writing my book. For the last two years I have researched the history surrounding my story. May I have the courage to write badly.



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